Final Draft

The worst day in the whole history

W.A.L.T: make improvements and present it to an audience

It was a sunny day in Africa it was November 12th.  My dad,I and our whole family were walking in the bright sun near the lake in Africa.  I was walking with my mum because I was to scared to be in the front,  as I am just a calf.  I wanted to get a drink, but my dad said no,  I was really thirsty.  Then an idea flew into my head.  I sneaked quietly, near the lake to get a drink, then I suddenly saw lions resting in the flaming hot sun.  My dad suddenly stopped, could this be my last drink?

I spotted some lions crouching near us, I was quite scared.  I knew what I had to do, but suddenly the lions ran in surprise, my dad said “Run for your life!”

I ran as as quick as I can, but  the lions separated me from my dad and his herd of buffaloes. Once they got me, I crashed into the cold and shiny water.  They kept on chewing and chewing on me, the pain was going through my body and threw my veins. The lions chewed and chewed on me but there was no blood coming out of my body.  I felt horrendous and unspeakable, the sun flashed in my eyes as the lions try to drag me out of the water.

But suddenly my biggest fear in the world, jumped out!  It was a crocodile pulling my leg!!!!!!! , I felt that they are having a tug war. The pride of lions kept on pulling me when the crocodile bit my leg,  It really hurt.  My 2 feared animals kept on pulling me, they never give up I wish I had my dad and his herd of buffaloes to help me in this terrible situation. I smell fear, the lions razor sharp teeth bit my leg, the taste of pain filled my body, as I hear sounds of lions roaring.  I feel the cold water shaking like there is an earthquake about to strike. I see a pride of lions and a hungry  crocodile trying to chew me. I couldn’t, move a muscle I felt like I am being pulled by a giant lion.  I never felt so alone before. The bright sun flew past my eyes, the pride of lions dragged me out of the cold and frightful depths of the lake.

Then I heard lots of stomping, it was my Dad and my Mum with their herd of buffaloes they came to save me I yelled “MOOOOOOOO!!”

They heard me. The crocodile was to sacred so he let go and swam away to the frightful depths of the lake.  My dad charged at the pride of lions, one of the lions stayed and kept on chewing me.  My uncle chased the last lion. I escaped to my dad and his herd of buffaloes who had saved me from that terrible situation.

I am so happy that I am now safe with my family and the herd.

                       By Lyan