I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Lyan, I like your mindmup it's so cool. I don't think I can say something thoughtful because, your mindmup is to small to read. Maybe you could use Screencastify so we know what your mindmup is about.
Hi Lyan, I like how you spreed out your orientation. I don't think I have a thoughtful Because I can't really read it But over all you have a lot of stuff to write about all the time.
Hey Lyan, it's Axle it's me, it's me. Your work is very fantastic I liked how you described it and your explaining of how will it happen. I'm sure that will be a great story. Here is my question, Do the chimp and his owner have a name?
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Hi Lyan, I like your mindmup it's so cool. I don't think I can say something thoughtful because, your mindmup is to small to read. Maybe you could use Screencastify so we know what your mindmup is about.
ReplyDeleteHi Lyan, I like how you spreed out your orientation. I don't think I have a thoughtful Because I can't really read it But over all you have a lot of stuff to write about all the time.
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ReplyDeleteHey Lyan, it's Axle it's me, it's me. Your work is very fantastic I liked how you described it and your explaining of how will it happen. I'm sure that will be a great story. Here is my question, Do the chimp and his owner have a name?
DeleteWow! Lyan I really like your plan out. Your narrative is going to turn out really good.
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