Battle at Kruger national park story

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened?
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

                      First Draft

The worst day in the whole history

It was a sunny day in africa it was 12 November. Mum, Dad,I and my dad’s herd of buffaloes were walking in the bright sun near the lake in Africa  .I was walking with my mum because I was to scared to be in the front,  anyway I am just a calf.  I wanted to get a drink but my dad said no,  I was really thirsty.Then an idea flew into my head I sneaked near the lake to get a drink then I suddenly saw lions resting in the flaming hot sun then my dad suddenly stopped could this be my  last drink .

I spotted some lions crouching near us, I was quite scared.  I knew what I had to do but suddenly the lions ran in surprise, my dad said run for your life ,I ran as as quick as I can, but  the lions separated me from my dad and his herd of buffaloes. Once they got me I crashed into the cold and shiny water ,they kept on chewing and chewing on, me the pain was going threw my body and threw my veins.

The lions chewed and chewed on me but there was no blood coming out of my body.  I see my biggest fear in the world, I feel so fearful I have  never ever felt like this before it was a  crocodile!!!!!!! pulling my leg, I felt that they are having a tug war. The pride of lions kept on pulling me when the crocodile bit my leg ,It really hurt.  My 2 feared animals kept on pulling me ,they never give up I wish I had my dad and his herd of buffaloes to help me in this terrible situation.

I smell fear in the way the, lions razor sharp teeth bit my leg, the taste of pain filled my body ,as I hear sounds of lions roaring, I feel the cold water shaking like there is an earthquake about to strike. I see a pride of lions and a hungry  crocodile trying to chew me. I couldn’t ,move a muscle I felt like I am being pulled by a giant lion.  I never felt so alone before ,the bright sun flew past my eyes,the pride of lions pulled me out of the cold and frightful deps of the lake.

Then I heard lots stomping, it was my Dad and my Mum with their herd of buffaloes they came to save me I yelled MOOOOOOOO!! and they heard me. The crocodile let go and swam away, my dad scared the pride of lions away the one of the lions stayed and kept on chewing me my uncle frightened the other lion  then I one lion ran away,  I escaped my dad and his herd of buffaloes saved me.

I feel so excited that the battle has ended I am finally with my family and their herd of buffaloes.

Lyan's animal creation

     Kangachee Squirrel  

Habitat: Grasslands and woodlands

Diet: omnivore

Eats Grass, meat, berries and mushrooms

Head: Red Squirrel

Cheezeb Squirrel growls, screech, chirp, rattle, and buzz.

Body: Kangaroo

Kangachee squirrel can hop around quickly on two legs or walk around slowly on all four. With their powerful hind legs, Kangachee Squirrel can jump 9 m (30 ft) in one hop and move 64 kilometers per hour (40 mph) when in a hurry.

Tail: Cheetah

Cheezeb Squirrel has a long, muscular tail that has a flat shape. The tail almost functions like a rudder on a boat because they use it to help control their steering and keep their balance when running very fast.

Lyan's Battle at Kruger Sequence

 W.A.L.T  Recall the events in order.                        

Battle of animals

	The herd of Buffaloes have entered the Lion’s home near the lake.
	The lions are waiting for the herd of Buffaloes to come closer.
	The Lion’s are camouflaging in the yellow dry grass.
	The Lion’s are separating the baby calf from the adult Buffaloes.
	The hungry Lions are chasing the baby calf.
	The Lions are having a food tug of war with the crocodile.
	The Adult Buffaloes came to take back the baby calf.
	The enormous Buffaloes scared the hungry Lions away.
	The Buffaloes saved the little baby calf.

Lyan's Learning goals

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