I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Even though the school holidays ended 4 weeks ago. We welcome Term 3. We are also happy that there is Winter Sports but it will be ending in Week 5. There will be lot of events and cool things happening so please, check it out and have a great day.
Good job lyan I like how you said that it was term 3 I think you should keep on doing this I also really like how you added full stops and capital letters I think that next time you can add a picture of a celebration party.
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Good job lyan I like how you said that it was term 3 I think you should keep on doing this I also really like how you added full stops and capital letters I think that next time you can add a picture of a celebration party.
ReplyDeleteThanks Lilly, I will make sure to do that next time.
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