Inspired Writing

Hi everyone! Welcome to another post today I will be sharing a sentence I have made while we were doing inspired writing. We had to write a sentence that was inspired by one of the pictures that were picked by students. Then we had to create 6 sentences:

1. Write a simple sentence that describes something about the picture.
2. Add adjectives to the simple sentence, to add more detail.
3. Add more language features like similes or metaphors to enhance the sentence.
4. Use topic words directly related to the picture.
5. Use emotive language to create/clarify mood.Lear
6. Paint a clear picture in the mind of my readers and give the reader detailed and specific information.

These were the things we needed to include in each sentence. We also had to highlight which specific subject we were writing. For example, we had to add adjective so that means we have to highlight all the adjectives. 

Here is my writing:

1. The woman stood on the edge of the rock.
2. The woman closely stood at the edge of the large rock.
3. The woman closely stood at the edge of the huge rock and underneath was a river that reflected like a mirror.
4. The woman closely stood at the edge of the radged rock, where the morning sun shone over the brooding mountain where the river was like a mirror and above was various hills. 
5. The woman courageously stood closely at the edge of the radged rock, where the morning sun shone over the brooding mountains where the rive was like a mirror.

The courageous woman, Raine, stood at the edge of the radged rock where she focuses her body and mind, as the time passes by the sun was now shining over the brooding mountains that reflect on the river like a mirror.

This was the picture that I used to write my sentences.

After writing and highlighting the sentences we then had to use an e-asTTle rubric to rate our writing. I think I would be an R5. Because I used emotive language to describe how the woman may have felt, I painted a clear picture in my reader's head about what the picture may look like.