This term my class has been working on some films for the film festival. My group is Genica, Keyana, Kea and me. My group has been working on a time lapse. We did time lapse of Candle and Ice melting. We have editing our video in a app called imovie. Here are some photos of my group editing, filming and waiting patiently for the candle to melt. I hope you like looking at our photos and enjoy!
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, September 16, 2016
Film Festival Prepation
Friday, September 9, 2016
Bledisloe cup Presentation
This week my partner Axle and I has been working on the slide called Bledisloe Cup. We have been learning facts that are very interesting. We've also looked at some sites that will give us information about the Bledisloe cup History. I found it challenging to turn the word from the sites in to my own words. I hope you like reading our presentation, and have a great day.
W.A.L.T: Locate key information from a range of resources.
\Friday, September 2, 2016
How divide with remainder part 2 - Maths
W.A.L.T Divide with remainder using larger numbers.
Last week I learnt how to divide with remainders, this is part two but there is a little twist it is using larger numbers. You can use this for big numbers but odd .I hope you like watching my video and enjoy!!
Friday, August 26, 2016
First Draft - The Unlucky Trip Story
In writing my writing group we made a story about the space Chimp my title is The Unlucky Trip. This is my first draft and the red text means it is my improvements.My punctuation a vocabulary are in red here is the video space chimp my story hope you enjoy.
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
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The title is suitable for the text.
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The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
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The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
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The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
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Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.
- The title is suitable for the text.
- The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
- The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
- The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
- Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.
The Unlucky Trip
First Draft
3, 2, 1 blast off! Whoosh! It was 1961, I was launched into space. I was really scared, it felt like I being thrown out by a cannon. As I was shooting across the atmosphere my heart was beating as it was about explode. All I had to think of is my trainer, he gave me a picture of me and him. Anyway my name is Jack and I am a Chimp. I was sent into space because people in the NASA space station could see how I survive in space.
I really miss my trainer, his name is Nathan. He raised me up to the chimp that I am now. I feel really scared and sad, then the radio went on. “Hello Jack are you there? Hello.”
I recognized that voice it was my trainer. I replied, “Oooh aaah!” that means hello, my trainer said “ Bye and Good luck Jack!!” and that was his last words.
65 years Later…………
Beep beep!!. I opened my eyes in confusion what was I doing here. The stars were as bright as shiny as a diamond sparkling. I closed my eyes and imagined suddenly my memories started to come back, my trainer I remember him, I saw the picture of him and me. I was a beautiful chimp when I was a little chimp I have furry and soft fur and a beautiful face. Now I am an old white whiskered chimp. Then I saw my home, it's earth it looked beautiful, I had a big smile in my face. Then I felt a scared I was going to earth I closed my eyes and imagined.
Terra firma!!
I landed, I got off the space capsule, instead of a beautiful colourful city it was a rusty, dusted and demolished earth. I yelled “ooohhh aahh” but no one replied. I fell to the ground and tears fell down. I felt so sad I didn’t know what to do. I stood up and explored the grey and broken city, I didn’t think it was a good idea but I went on. I went back to the space capsule to get my picture with my trainer, for a second I thought that humans destroyed this city and my trainer betrayed me.
I ran as fast as I can, once I was out of energy I took a seat in a bench. After a few hours, a girl came passing by she said,“ run, run, run for you lives or you will die!!”
I ran with her she was pretty she was nice she was a human. I stopped for a moment to asked her what had happened but she interrupted she said “what are you doing run!!!” I said “ oooh aaah “ that means what happened here. She said “ evil chimps, “ and that the only thing she said.
I said to myself did she understand, I ran with her I couldn’t run that fast because I was very old, I tripped on a rock she held me up and we ran together. She said “were safe.” She started talking about how the evil chimps took over the planet. She said “ the chimps betrayed the humans. I felt devastated and Depressed , then I heard a bang!!.
“Ahhh!!! Evil chimps” she said “run!!!” she said, so I ran with her I didn’t have much energy. I ran and I ran as fast as I can, “ ooooh aaaah “ that means I can’t run anymore I tripped on a rock and fell down. The picture of me and my trainer I smiled, I saw the evil chimps they weren’t going for me they were going for the girl. I ran in front of them and said “oooohh aaaaah” that means what are you doing to this poor girl.
They said “We are going to kill her” I said “ooooh aaaah” that means then you'll have to go through me. They said “you you're too weak and old,” I said to the girl run run for your lives” she hided in a house. The evil chimps pulled out their swords and ripped me up and that was the last of me the space chimp. The End
an’t run anymore I tripped on a rock and fell down. The picture of me and my trainer I smiled, I saw the evil chimps they weren’t going for me they were going for the girl. I ran in front of them and said “oooohh aaaaah” that means what are you doing to this poor girl.
They said “We are going to kill her” I said “ooooh aaaah” that means then you'll have to go through me. They said “you you're too weak and old,” I said to the girl “run run for your lives” she hided in a house. The evil chimps pulled out their swords and ripped me up and that was the last of me the space chimp. The End
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Term 3 2016
Maths - Dividing with Remainders
This week I have been learning how to divide with remainders. This strategy is for numbers that are odd, and it is a stage 7 strategy. I found this lesson quiet hard to understand, I like this strategy because it could help me with my divisions because I don't know much of it. I hope you like it and have a great day.
Friday, August 19, 2016
Maths - Divide in parts
W.A.L.T Divide in parts
This week for maths I have been learning how to divide in parts, here is a video that will teach you how to divide in parts. I hope you like watching my video and have a great day.
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Term 3 2016
Friday, August 12, 2016
Maths - How to use grid method
Today I will be teaching you how to do a grid method so you can solve long multiplication or complicated multiplication. And you only need to add a lines if its higher numbers. My next step is to solve 3 digit numbers with 2 digit numbers. This strategy helped to solve multiplication that I don't know.
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