W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
- I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.
- The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
- Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
- A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.
The Amazing Trip to Learning
On the Friday 10th of March, Ako Ngatahi travelled to Spencer Park to have a fun day of learning. I was so excited to go to Spencer park, I couldn’t wait to go on the bus to explore other places. It was a great day to go out for the trip the sun was shining and there was not a cloud in sight
There were 105 people who came to Spencer park to collect some treasure for art. At school we had to get in groups, I was in group 2. After that we had to get ready for our trip.
So after a while our teacher called us to go on the mat and then grab our bags to go line up. Next we walked to the court to sort out the groups. Second we walked to the bus. In the bus I sit with Ryleigh and talked and we played fun games until we got to Spencer park.
Once we arrived at Spencer Park we had to sort out groups and where we are going. We also had to go in alphabetic groups with parents and some of the teachers. It was time to begin our journey I picked up my bag and the teacher gave us instructions.
We gently walked to the road. When we were walking we saw some cool trees, one was shaped like an umbrella and another one looked like a human. Once we got to the beach we walked on sand it felt like you were sinking in sand. We put our bags in the sand and we explored. I played with Ranit because I had no friends there. We found some shells and buried it so we can get it again. We also found a blue bottle jellyfish I was quite scared because I heard that it could sting you but it didn’t do anything. Next me and Ran It It found a big piece of wood we put it on top of the buried shells. Then Ranit said to look behind me and his friend was holding a seaweed behind me I ran so fast I it made me have goosebumps. Next the teacher said we had to go back. So we gently trudge back to Spencer Park.
When we got back to Spencer Park, we had morning tea and we had a little play on the playground. I was playing on the big red spider web I was quite sacred but I learnt to conquer my fears. After a long time of climbing I finally reached the top of the big red spider web. After a long climb I decided to play with Ranit on the zip line. I ran to zip line no one was there except Ranit and I, I climbed up the zip line and Ran It pushed me when I got to the tyres I swung up into the air. I jumped down and pulled it to Ranit, he jumped and I pushed him until he got to the tyres. He jumped down and we both ran back to the teacher because we now had to go the Lagoon walk.
Ranit and I grabbed our bags and walked to Adrenaline Forest and walked near the Lagoon we walked until we reached sand, now we were walking in sand it felt like I was sinking, it was also really hot. We stopped at front of the signs we didn’t know where to go so we headed left. After hiking for a few minutes I realised that we were no longer walking on sand, we stopped at the end and realized that we had headed the wrong way. So we decided to take a rest for few minutes and went back. We gently trudge back to spencer park.
Once we got back we went to the bird lookout. Ranit and I quickly climbed up the ladder. We saw 2 kinds of birds it looked like a Tui, it was very far away so I couldn’t see that well. Next we walked back to Spencer Park to have lunch.
My lunch was 2 oranges 6 donuts and popcorn. After that we went to play in the playground. I played with Ranit for half an hour and then I saw my friend from another school.
Lastly we went back to school, I learned some cool and amazing things from the park I learned to not touched a blue bottle jellyfish because it might sting you. My favourite part of the day was going to the beach. The Lagoon walk and the playground was fun but I liked the Beach much more.
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