Was the clouds infected???

For this weeks writing we are doing a story about a cloud, the title was Partly cloudy.  It was a story about a sad little cloud.  I really like this story because it s very inspiring.  It inspired me to write a full story about this story.  

Reflective Comment: It is very inspiring and also a very sad story, what I coukd do next time is to put more descriptive words.  

Partly Cloudy

Let me tell you about the story of the lonely cloud, which is me.  This story is about storks and clouds, but there is more stuff to add to that.  

The day was about to start, the sun was as bright as a sparkling star.  The cloud looked like big pink fluffy cotton candy.  The sun was reflecting through the blue sky, now the sky looked like pink cotton candy.   Storks were flying above the colourful town.  The house were coloured with beautiful bright colours such as green and light green.  The storks was delivering a lots of babies and some pets.  

One of the storks delivered to a house, inside a bag was 2 adorable kitties.  They had ginger fur, it was as soft as a bunny's fur.  After they delivered, they went back up to the clouds.  They were flying through the other clouds, I pack of them flew into a cloud, it wasn’t just a cloud it was a big one.  They went through the cloud but when they got to the other side they were in the other side.  A miracle came true, there were like living clouds everywhere.  If you're asking how I know that that's because I am  a lonely cloud, not happy, sad and lonely.

All the other clouds was making cool things like, babies, pets and more.  Oh, I forgot to introduce myself I so caught in my story, so my name is Gus.  I wanted to be the same like the other clouds but I couldn’t, make any of their amazing living things.  Just looking at the happy clouds was making me sadder.  I was below the happy clouds waiting for my stork to arrive, he took a really long time.  So I practiced to use my cloud powers, I tried making something like an animal.  But which animal, so I tried rolling a piece of cloud out.  As I was rolling I added more cloud dough.   So now I knew what I was making I was making a crocodile.

I took made 4 little holes in the middle of my creation, to make the little legs, for my creation or should I call it a crocodile.  I flashed it with some of my powerful lightning, with a flash of light the crocodile was alive.  It had razor sharp teeth, with rough, hard scales.  Instantaneously, he opened his mouth and bites me and he chipped a bit of my hand.  I growed my hand again, and told off the little crocodile.  I placed it down on my working space and looked if my stork was coming.  I saw him his name was Peck, once he arrive at my cloud.  He looked really tired, but I didn’t think that he wouldn’t feel that way.  

He raised his wing and looked like a military guy or something like that. I hug him in surprised and rub on his head.  Fred made me so happy, that he poked my nose with his sharp beak.  

He looked like he wanted to deliver something, so I turned my back on him and grabbed my creation.  So then I showed him, he was a little bit surprised\ about my creation or should I call it a crocodile.  He tried to touch it but the crocodile bites his head, but don’t worry he wasn’t injured.  Peck couldn't see anything  because the crocodile was still in his head, I mean biting his head.

I took the little baby crocodile out of his head,  I put the baby crocodile on my working space made a little bag to put the crocodile on.  I gave it to him and Peck flew away with a very annoying crocodile.  I waved goodbye to my little friend, until tomorrow I knew he would come back.  The next day I made a big horn sheep, but it was a baby bighorn sheep, she was really cute.  But she was also very rough, not just rough very, very rough.  Now that was just a thought of the bighorn sheep being rough or being gentle.  A few minuted later, Peck arrived, he stood next to me.  Peck showed out his wings but the feather below all ripped off .  I was surprised so I decided to pat him and give him a run through of his body.   So then I showed him my creation, with a flash of light the bighorn sheep came to life.  

Peck looked up to the sky, he saw one of the white clouds making a little cute puppy, I knew he was thinking about quiting me.  Peck was looking very happy, I looked on what I made gave it to him.  Peck flew away with the rough bighorn sheep, I felt so bad for him.  

The next day he flew in and I was making a porcupine, the flashed it with lighting.  The hedgehog came to life.  Peck touched the hedgehog and when it came to life, his wings got pricked by the sharp prickles of the hedgehog.  He was getting prickled everywhere so I took the hedgehog and wrapped it inside a bag.  Then he flew away, when we came back he had the prickles all over his head.  I took it out piece by piece, and removed the feathers from the prickles.  I hugged and and let showed him it was a little baby shark.  He was scared out of his feathers.  

He looked up into the other clouds,  the other clouds made little chicks.  So he flew to the other clouds, and landed on one of the girl clouds.  She took him in and made him, I got so angry that a grew larger.  And made a lightning bolt, Peck was given something.  And he came and delivered the eel that I made.  So we lived happily every after.